Parallelism in writing: Definition, rules, and examples

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Just as these two cacti match in form, parallel structure ensures your sentences remain balanced and consistent.
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Parallelism, also known as parallel structure, is the repetition of a specific grammatical form within a sentence or list. When you use the same word pattern, you’re signaling to your reader that these ideas are equally important. It creates a mental shortcut that helps people follow your logic without getting tripped up by clunky phrasing.

Think of it as a rhythmic balance. If you start a list with an “-ing” verb (a gerund), every other item in that list should also be an “-ing” verb. This consistency makes your writing more professional, easier to digest, and much more persuasive.

Why does parallel structure matter?

Using parallel structure isn’t just about following strict grammar rules; it is about improving the user experience for your reader.

BenefitHow it works
ClarityIt stops readers from having to ‘re-read’ a sentence because the pattern changed mid-way through.
EmphasisIt highlights related ideas by giving them equal weight in a sentence.
FlowIt creates a natural rhythm (cadence) that makes your prose more engaging.
ProfessionalismIt shows a command of the English language, crucial for business and academic writing.

Common examples of parallelism

To understand how to fix faulty parallelism, compare these incorrect and correct structures across different sentence types.

1. Parallelism in lists

In a list, every item must be the same part of speech.

  • Incorrect: She likes dancing, to swim, and playing guitar.
  • Correct: She likes dancing, swimming, and playing guitar.

2. Parallelism in comparisons

When comparing two things using “than” or “as,” the elements must match.

  • Incorrect: My father enjoyed both cooking and to bake.
  • Correct: My father enjoyed both cooking and baking.

3. Parallelism with correlative conjunctions

Phrases like not only… but also or either… or require identical structures on both sides.

  • Incorrect: He is not only fluent in English, but also in French he can speak.
  • Correct: He is not only fluent in English but also fluent in French.

4. Parallelism in clauses

Consistency should remain even in longer, more complex sentences.

  • Incorrect: The manager told me to clean my desk, to organize my files, and that I should make sure to back up my computer.
  • Correct: The manager told me to clean my desk, organize my files, and back up my computer.

Practical tips for ESL students and writers

If you want your writing to sound more natural and ‘native,’ mastering this one rule will do more for you than memorizing a thousand vocabulary words.

  1. The “list” check: Look at every “and” or “or” in your writing. Are the words on both sides the same “type” (e.g., all nouns, all adjectives, or all verbs)?
  2. The “read aloud” test: Parallel sentences have a musical beat. If you trip over a phrase while reading out loud, you likely have a parallelism error.
  3. The “verb tense” audit: Ensure you aren’t switching between past and present tense within the same list of actions.

A note on “literary license“: Experienced authors sometimes break these rules to create a jarring effect or to surprise the reader. However, for business, academic, or technical writing, sticking to the rules is the safest way to ensure your message is received clearly.


Frequently asked questions about parallelism

Parallel structure is essential because it acts as a “signpost” for the reader. When you maintain a consistent grammatical pattern, the reader’s brain doesn’t have to work as hard to process the relationship between ideas. This improves readability, builds rhythmic flow, and gives your arguments more rhetorical authority.

While they are related, they serve different purposes:

  • Parallelism is a broad grammatical term for using the same word form (e.g., all nouns or all verbs) in a series.
  • Anaphora is a specific rhetorical device where the exact same word or phrase is repeated at the beginning of successive clauses (e.g., “I have a dream… I have a dream…”).

All anaphora is parallel, but not all parallelism uses the same repeating words.

In casual speech, native speakers often break parallelism (e.g., “I like hiking and to fish”). However, in professional, legal, and academic writing, failing to use parallel structure is considered a significant error or red flag. It can make your writing sound “clunky” or amateurish to a native ear.

The easiest way to fix faulty parallelism is to identify the “stem” of the sentence and ensure every item in the list fits it.

  • The Stem: “I want…”
  • The List: “…to eat, to sleep, and going home.” (Faulty)
  • The Fix: “…to eat, to sleep, and to go home.” (Parallel) If you can’t make them match, it is better to split the ideas into two separate sentences.

Yes. Let’s be real: most people scan online articles rather than reading every word. If your bullet points switch from “How to” instructions to “Benefit” descriptions, it confuses both the user and the search algorithm. Always start every bullet point in a list with the same part of speech (e.g., all action verbs or all nouns).

Generally, no. In most cases, you’ll want to stick to one tense. If you are describing a sequence of actions, keeping the verb tense consistent is vital for clarity. Switching from “We analyzed the data” to “and then we are reporting the results” creates a “tense shift” that disrupts the parallel flow.

In formal grammar, it is a rule. In creative writing, it can be a style choice. Famous authors sometimes use “intentional non-parallelism” to create a sense of chaos or to emphasize a specific word that stands out from the pattern. However, for 99% of writing tasks, following the rule is the “best practice” for clear communication.


Summary of parallelism rules

ElementRule for Parallelism
GerundsUse “-ing” for all items (e.g., running, jumping, swimming).
InfinitivesUse “to” for all items (e.g., to run, to jump, to swim).
AdjectivesDon’t mix adjectives with nouns (e.g., fast, quiet, and efficient).
ConjunctionsEnsure both sides of “and,” “but,” and “or” are equal.

Visual tools to help you learn

Are you struggling to understand parallelism? These two videos will help reinforce what you just learned.

Oregon State University guide on parallelism


Parallel structure


Mastering parallelism in your daily writing

Achieving a professional tone doesn’t require complex vocabulary; often, it simply requires balance. By applying parallel structure to your lists, comparisons, and everyday sentences, you transform “clunky” prose into a rhythmic, persuasive narrative. Whether you are drafting a formal essay, an important email, or a speech, consistency is your most powerful tool for clarity.

Remember, the goal of grammatical parallelism is to make your reader’s job easier. When your sentences flow logically, your ideas take center stage.

Join the conversation: How do you use parallel structure?

We want to hear from you! Is there a specific sentence you’re struggling to make parallel? Or perhaps you’ve spotted a hilariously “faulty” example in a public sign or advertisement?

  • Leave a comment below with your toughest grammar questions or your favorite examples of parallelism in literature.
  • Share this guide with a friend or colleague who is working on their writing skills—it’s the fastest way to help them level up their prose.

By practicing these rules today, you’ll ensure your message is not just heard, but remembered.


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